For icemember and revansith lord. Let me know if I need to add something to the description. Not public yet, this is an early preview

WOWHOO!! I'm impressed! This early work is as good as a masterpiece!

Nice work, Twinkey! Slight typo on 'chapter' about midway through. :P Sorry - a man of literature tends to notice those.

But it's very impressive. I've sadly been so busy with life that I barely can get to this stuff. Rest assured, though, I will still be doing a post-release trailer of 1-1, 1-2, and 1-3.

stupid me, lol. How can I have done that, well no worries. Gives me time to revisit the video and correct it. Scheduled for a thursday release! Or whenever you release it.

Thank ice and revan, im glad you guys liked it. I really wish I could have done more with it but there only is so much a 2gig ram computer can put out.

Final Version.